Something to tell you

by Chelsey   Jan 24, 2013


Has anyone ever told you that you're beautiful?
You're the sound of piano keys composing a
love song, the sight of a mornings greeting, the
touch of velvet. Has anyone ever told you
that you're altogether breath taking?

You are.

I could be lost in your gaze and never want to
find my way home. Wrecklessly abandoned in
your arms and never want to be found. Suffocate
in your kiss and never want to be revived. Has
anyone ever told you how appealing you are?

You are.

Can I reply to the invitation your smile sends
me? The one that welcomes me to blush
unconsciously, laugh flirtaciously. The one
that tells the world you're charming and
completely ravishing.

Has anyone ever told you how exquisite you are?

You are.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    And, here I am, back. Late, as usual. Slap me?

    Anyway.

    I am completely in love with the 2nd 3rd and 4th lines of your opening stanza. Oh my. I just can't get over them. They are breathtaking and beautiful, and you write your thoughts on this person so elegantly without it turning into cliche. The "piano keys" really moved me, as it was so unique. It's not something I have seen on here (or anywhere) before.

    Your second stanza..well, what can I say? It's even better than the first. Again, you manage to portray your thoughts and feelings about this person in such a magnificent way, and in a way it kind of reminds me of 'first love.' When you fall head over heels for someone, and they are just indescribably perfect for you.

    "Can I reply to the invitation your smile sends me?"

    I LOVE that. It's such unique wording. We hear about a person's smile all the time in poetry (I'm guilty too) but you manage to recapture that here with your unique flair.

    Your repetition of "you are" works exteremely well throughout this. It makes me feel like...you NEED to keep reminding them, keep telling them, just how special they are to you. That they HAVE to believe it.

    I love this.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    WOW, this was beautiful, I love it soooo much, it makes my whole heart go awwwwwwwwwww, wonderful job in every way, never stop writing, 100/100

  • 11 years ago

    by Natasha

    Indeed. It's beautiful,
    and left me speechless, for sure! c:

  • 11 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    Has anyone told you how beautiful ua poems are??lol
    Your writings are so captivating...enchanting...
    I'm amazed & left speechless after reading this wonderful piece of yours! Just wow!5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Evry single line of dis poem is beautiful,chels..

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