I was murdered

by The Poet Behind The Poems   Jan 24, 2013


Autumn leafs danced between
clashes of winds, while my soul
was on the edge of a cliff of
emotions.

Knowing that one day soon
his face would be only past
memories was like a knife cutting
deep into my skin-

Losing you was the force that
penetrated my heart, on that
day I was gone, murdered
inside.

As a body I look and sound
The same, but the man you
once knew and loved ,
is not
me.

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  • 11 years ago

    by DirtRoadGirl

    I loved this.. You are sooo talented; i'm jealous

  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Gud poem tony, bt d first half is much better than d other half..
    I read uor earlier poems and i wasnt expecting dat u wud let d reader understand
    D whole idea of u being murdered..so easily.
    I mean d idea of u nt bein d same person anymore..

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    I'm at a loss for words. The emotion in this was so loud in so few words. I felt like I was standing outside, cold, and the poem was a plot taking place.

    Fantastic imagery.

  • 11 years ago

    by dalllllal

    This is a great poem! Wonderful choice of words and writing I loved it

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    You captured a great deal of sadness in this piece, I love the idea of being murdered by your emotions.

    Lovely write.

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