by Baby Rainbow Jan 25, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I was the Blackbird trying to understand the energies of mother nature |
by Ben Pickard
Birds have been a passion of mine for years Saffie, so I was instantly drawn to this. Original, clever piece and I loved the ending. |
Your an amazing writer. you give writing a new twist. good job. |
by Maher
I love birds and this poem is my cup of tea. I especially love the many different birds used to represent the changes and pressures you describe artfully in this poem. A poem that involves research, cultural belief and superstition to a degree. |
by Tara
Your endings are so powerful!! Another poem where the ending gave me goosebumps. I can feel your words, this is very well done. 5/5 ~Tara |
by Midnight Sky
I give this one a 5\5 & two thumbs up :) |