This piece is amazing and it´s right up there with "Jackals & Chains". Fantastic imagery and I got vibes from old school American writers. (Keurac, for the life of me I can´t spell that name right) and some Cormac McCarthy vibes in there aswell. A clear 5!

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I see a modern western, where a loner is longing to be back home but has to take care of business first, very vivid imagery. Great job, Jason!

So sad Jason, its so hard to be so far away from your loved ones, but we do what must be done to survive... I know they miss you too and you'll all be together again soon. This is a very touching piece.