This piece is well written. I really like the word choice and the style. The flow is a bit choppy, but the rest is nice. Your voice shines in this piece and it says a lot, it also makes it easier for me to relate to this piece. Great job.

It's been a while since I last read one of your poems. This is very different from your usual styles but none the less it is well written - conveys exactly what you feel.

Very deep poem lots of emotion... i do hope your ok, i still care for you very much and think of you often