by Tara Kay
I can see their is a deep meaning to this piece and one that is quite inspiring. |
I agree with Tara Kay about the flow. Also, in the first line of stanza 3, it's Nazarene. There are some things that should have been capitalized, but as far as the writing in general and the message, it's good! |
In my opinion the piece needs some revision of some words. First every new sentence should starts with a capital letter. Some words inside the lines should also start with capitals, as a matter of glorifying, like "God", "His awesome" and "His image". Some words like "awsome" should read "awesome". The word "made" sounds better if it reads "created". |