The simplest poem I've read today, but still the meaning is deep. Wow, you're good. Keep up the good work!

Nice poem :)

I know this is simple and it's REALLY touching but it buggs me how it should be "I'll be in sorrow tomorrow", when you type "I'll be sorrow tomorrow" i know it's your poem but it buggs me just that other than that i want to cry since it's sooo sad but so beautiful i hope you take my advise and change it lol but you don't have to! :) 5/5

Moria Bella Bair