Winter (acrostic)

by Meena Krish   Jan 28, 2013


Winter fairy sprinkles her star shaped love
Imprinting a serene presence from above,
Nature cuddles and sleeps under her spell
Till spring children unfold to spread their tale,
Eloquently she adorns the world with snow flakes
Revealing her wintry beauty when we awake.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Vic Johns

    Nice short poem describing winter, although if you don't mind a little critique, how about finishing the last line with 'when the world awakes' ?

    That would rhyme better with flakes the last word of the previous line.

  • 11 years ago

    by ganjaru

    I love it thanks :]]

  • 11 years ago

    by ganjaru

    I love it thanks :]]

  • 11 years ago

    by ganjaru

    I love it thanks :]]

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Winter fairy sprinkles her star shaped love

    How do you get such beautiful images in your mind...this is just so beautiful...loved the complete poem.

    all the best & take care

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