I think i love this poem!!! :) lol just kidding but i'm glad i did a collab with you girl! :) 5/5

Queen Ashlin

Still amazed and completely shocked this is by far my most fav. collab.

This was well worth the read and held my interest all the way through this intense but sad poem. Amazing write 5>>>>>>>>>>>

I really enjoyed reading this poem and I have read it now a couple of times. You have a nice flow, good rhymes, nice imagery and good pace. To be honest it does seem a little rough around the edges with some repeating rhymes here and there and places where the beat goes a bit off, but at the end I wasn´t even aware of that because you delivered such a good allround poem. I will definitely read more of your work!

Ares

This was a great read. I really like the rhyme scheme. The girl in this story seems to find her identity in her disappointments in life, like trusting someone, who broke her heart. Now she'd rather die alone than risk being hurt again, and she longs for death. No offense, but the only problem I had was that some of the non-rhyming lines in the middle of the rhyming ones threw me off a bit. Other than that, you guys did a great job.