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I enjoyed reading this piece...

"There is a life that I am supposed to live or rather I could live, but have approached from the wrong angle.
Now it seems I have tried swimming without water, needlessly flapping about creating waves in the dark that no one but me could see."

^^ My favourite stanza,

Nicely penned :)

This is a very inspirational piece of writing, a piece of art, I love it sooooo much, great flow

Wow!! This is an amazing, deep piece of poetry..

A lot of times people try growing up faster than they should, or they lag behind and dont grow up at all...regardless, coming to that realization of "I need to find myself and live life at the right pace" is an awesome turning point...I am there right now as well..finding myself and loving the journey its taking me on...

I feel this poem is almost too personal for someone to critique or break apart. It was simply beautiful, and best of luck to you on becoming a better person. I always feels thats so important and a huge step someone takes!

Well done!

I love this. I felt like standing up and cheering after reading this. So greatly worded, and inspirational.