I mean really, could you melt me down even more?

This is beautiful!! I like the posed question in the beginning and the fact that you answered it at the end..I always love poems that DONT keep me wondering, because I'm nosey lol.

This is seriously so beautiful because of its simplicity. It didnt need to be drawn out for your point to be made....it was clear how special this person is.

Loved it!

Maryanne, this is beautiful...
I love how short it is yet how deep and powerful it is as well, it wasn't overly simple but it wasn't crammed full of a thousand metaphors and tongue tying words...
it was elegant yet sad, romantic yet subdued...

This was just beautiful.

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