Low Fat Love

by Maple Tree   Jan 29, 2013


I came to you fully packaged,
filled with preservatives,
the amount of cholesterol
in my eyes was enough
to make you feel like
you were kissing an
oil drenched french
fry.

Since the beginning of
our love, my heart
became organic,
fresh, new, alive-

Loving me is no longer
harmful to your health,

the water of your soul
has purified the depths
of me....

Note: Another fun challenge from James <3

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  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is very sweet, love the title! Well done xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    LOL, I love it! Very creative!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I love this, How you used the bad feeling fatty foods give you as how you felt before you met him and how you feel now...beautiful yet creative and a little humorous too

    Loved it...:)