I can't even describe this, it was just sooo beautiful, and powerful, the romance and the serene movement of it made it flow smoothly, and it was just beyond sweet.

I love it. OMG, I am speechless

I have read your latest before I read this now, and this sounds similar in perfection to that!

My God!! I have finished my votes, and I also wish to see this on the front page.

I'm just fond of how amazing your writings are turning out to be to date. You evolved beautifully through words.

I am, too, speechless.

Write On :D

**Just being beside you, listening to you say nothing at all, the two of us swaddled under one blanket. Nestled tightly.**

^^That is what real true love is... if you have that, you have everything.

This is a beautiful write Chelz.

OMFG that was awesome!!!!! And it was pretty vivid.

I liked the last 4 lines because it was saying a relationship is more than sex which 80% of hollywood movies try to make it the opposite by putting the sex first then the love which I think is shallow especially when it is on their first date.

Awesome stanzas sweet pea. This was lovely...

This is beautiful I loved it from beginning to end your style in writing and choice of words are amazing

The detail in this is just beautiful. It takes love and picks it apart, summing it up perfectly. The only part I don't get is the third stanza, it seems a little out of place. Who is the mysterious 'she' in it? Aside from that (and that could just be me not reading it right), this is fantastic

The detail in this is just beautiful. It takes love and picks it apart, summing it up perfectly. The only part I don't get is the third stanza, it seems a little out of place. Who is the mysterious 'she' in it? Aside from that (and that could just be me not reading it right), this is fantastic