Thorn Tree Can't Give Grapefruits [Double Tanka]

by Khalid M Darwish   Jan 30, 2013


They differ on God -
Thus can't agree about you
Whatever perfect,
they remain deficient since
they can add more things to themselves

Every day I live -
is in fact a gift from God
I won't waste it in
insomnia of future
or in regret of the past

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  • 11 years ago

    by shakil ahmed

    I like your poem. I love mention of God whose love and reassuring hand i so much seek.

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    Short but very powerful i love the first sentence of the poem it's just beautiful to my eyes since that little sentence relates to everyone around the world whether they are atheists or Christians or Catholics or anything in general i really like it! :) 5/5 from me

    Queen Ashlin

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