This is beautiful huni. I love it!! I love that song also. You took a lovely piece and made it into a masterpiece! Only you could do that. You are my most favourite author of poetry. I so look forward to your posts. Every piece of art by you is phenomenal. Words just can't express :-)

Danika.

This is quite different from the other poems I've read from you. Perhaps, because you didn't use any metaphors which I've become accustomed too. This one was just straight to the point and...sometimes, when we write about love, there is no need to hide our feeling....another enjoyable read.

The song credit made me giggle. The poem is adorable! The last line is supposed to be striking -- which it is, as the last sentence is very meaningful and clever-- but I was at first confused when I read "I can't express my love for you"... I know it was supposed to tie in with the line preceding it, but it just sounds weird. My only suggestion, and a mere suggestion at that because the poem is still beautiful, is to change it to "they can't express my love for you" so that the reader knows for sure you're speaking about the words.

Wonderful write. Very clever!

5/5
IdTakeABulletForYou
(Stephen)

This is truly stunning and sweet. There are no words where true love is concerned.

Em