Comments : Flora's Last Kiss

  • 11 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    @.@!!!

    I enjoyed reading this piece, well penned missy...

    "She returns to her post, reluctant and remorseful
    and watches from afar, as they shelter their eyes from the cold.
    Her smooth, porcelain complexion changes to the color of her broken heart,
    as her frozen tears bury the spectator trees alive."

    ^^ favourite stanza

    • 11 years ago

      by Rusheena

      Thanks, it's one of my favorites too. Glad you liked it. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Liz

    I will admit, the main reason I clicked to read this was because my mother's name is Flora :P.
    But I am glad I did! Though it had a tone of meloncholy, (to me at least) it was beautiful. Makes me look at things different. I enjoyed reading it.

    • 11 years ago

      by Rusheena

      Aww, thanks! And you're right, it does. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)