This is like a travel for me. Where ever we be, feel home!
And I could actually feel the things you mentioned in here.

A suggestion:

It's who we are and wear were from

^^ this line should be changed to It's who we are and wear we're from

or

It's who we are and wear we were from

Else
this is a blissful poem and last but not the least, I liked the title:)

Keep penning!

So sweet poem, and I agree with Amreen about the critiques. I loved yr work.

I seen on your profile you are from Virginia, well I'm from Kentucky and I was sitting here thinking, 'hey, that sounds like here!' :)

I love the mention of 'rainstorms and muddy feet' ... it's storming here right now and it just held a lot of imagery for me 'cause I felt like you was lookin' right outside my window! lol

Lovely piece... but on this line I have a small critique

"It's who we are and wear were from "

- It should be "It's who we are and WHERE WE'RE from"

other than that, perfect.

This poem never missed a beat I think Amreen made a good suggestion about an edit were to we're great poem though
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