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  • 12 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    I like this. There's a few errors in punctuation, but it's another sweet poem.

    and if you tell me yes, that's worth waiting.

    ^^I like this line. It gives the poem a patient, calm feel. Very nice!

    • 12 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Thank you madam... i will make it better for my next poems... your comments will help me a lot :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Sweet and refreshing to know:)

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, this is perfect, pure poetry, wonderful job, I really loved this poem, you really brought out your heart in these words and poured emotion into the lines, NEVER STOP WRITING AND NEVER LEAVE HER!!!