Tears and Sweat [Tanka]

by Khalid M Darwish   Jan 31, 2013


Each of tears and sweat -
has its specific action,
though both taste salty
Tears gifts you with compassion
and sweat affords you the change

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  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    I really do love it because this tells my story from beginning to end! very beautiful poem my dear! :) 5/5

    Queen Ash

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is inspiring! A simple note worth a thousand words!
    Excellent:)