So amazing and powerful love. I loved it 5/5 <3 please stay strong. |
Thanks :-) been working on it all day |
by whoami
Omfg Kelwin u r amazing! That was the most intense poem I hve ever read... |
by Natasha
The emotion I sense in this piece is pretty strong. It's not sadness, it's anger, and yet, an accomplishment. I so love how you stayed in one category, that makes you an amazing person, Kelwin. |
THIS IS SO SAD, If I wans't in school right now, I would have started crying, you write so beautifully and so emotional, your heart pours completely out into your writing, making the best lines, words, and poems, FANTASTIC POEM, I'm here for ya bro! Please never give up! |
I liked this one, powerful and nicely written, keep it up and keep your head up <3 |