In His Eyes

by Maple Tree   Feb 2, 2013


Ultimate depths of a woman's soul
are viewed in the eyes of the man
who loves her.

He gazes past the grace of hazel sparkles,
feeling the rhythm of her personality,
within the cracks of his smile.

The beauty he loves is the passion in her
heart, it rages in his veins like a beating
drum.

Her very aura tickles his skeletal form,
dancing in tune with every twirl of her
flowered gown,
upon the eve of a new moon,
when the light radiates her sleepy eyes,
that is when he levitates, hand in hand
in her dreams.

She can see it in his eyes, forever and always~

For James <3

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  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Not going into too much with this, all going to say is that a love like this is very beautiful and it touches me deeply when you write this way as it keeps my soulmate alive for me through your words and I cannot tell you what a gift that is to me.

    Thank you <3 x

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well Andrea, You know how I feel about the love you and James have, and well..you captured here every single inch of that love...eyes can tell so much about a person and what they are feeling...

    I love the words you used, how it is romantic and sweet but not mushy, it is special and very neatly penned.

    Just beautiful x

  • 11 years ago

    by CuteThingsGoneWrong

    Adorable love poem :3 You don't get the side of what a girl sees in a guys eyes... So you dont get to see a girls point of view of a guy this way to often..
    And i suppose its true...

    Most males, at least to my experience, when they love they look past the outer shell that females tend to put up so much... I've noticed that girls are quicker to put up a shell, even with close friends, while guys can just be a guy around strangers... (Girls tend to have closer relationships from what ive noticed though, but i wonder if its all superficial)
    Aha now im going off topic...

    I did like this poem xD And it made me think :3

    Edit: He should feel special you wrote this for him :3

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