Very powerful and wise

Awww.. wow Khalid this poem is so well-written and influential! The title caught my eye. I love the message you're portraying in this poem.. it's really strong and I can tell how important it is to you.

I really pondered over the ending... in fact I'm still thinking about it!

Well done!

Consciences let us sleep or not at night, that is if people have one. Though everyone should, I don't how some people get rid of it.. or if they even had one.. thoughtful piece.

This reminds me of the expression "Look before you leap." You never know if you're going to lose something, unless you actually think out what you're going to do, before, or if, you do it.

"When I plan to do something
I always think of consequences, just to be safe
because who often obey his desire
will definitely fall in astray"

It is true, that if we followed our every desire we have, our lives can become difficult. Not only is it a selfish way to live, it's a dangerous way.

Great poem!