Well, I don't know what anyone else is gonna say or feel about this one... but to me, its very sensual... hhhhmmmmm

I love the changing pace to this.piece, makes it feel as if as a reader you're actually on the train, gathering speed.
Really clever wording too. Awesome write here.

Hmmm, I re-read after seeing Angies comment and I dunno now Lol
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You are so freaking hilarious! I totally got the sensual feeling here as well..

AMAZIZNG metaphor for it...honestly, you are the Queen of metaphors, but this one actually blew me away..its hard to cover up a personal, naughty poem *cough cough*....but you did that entirely to well here, making two stories seem beautiful...one about a REAL journey on a train ride..another on a ...well you know. LOL

I freaking love this and I know you knew I would! :)

This is amazing, I love the use of the train
Great poem:)

As I am an entirely innocent person, I only read this as a train spotter would and I am left wondering

'did you take the number of this steam locomotive?'