Saffie, There's something about this poem, that when I read it...I get lost, its a difficult thing to explain...I feel like the spirit being reborn is a symbol here but for what and whom I am unsure...I also feel that there is someone who keeps changing (I know I'm not making sense, just a bit confused with the direction this poem was meant to lead)

I like the ending the most, it flowed very smoothly there...not that it didn't throughout...just the ending had that little bit extra that really felt smooth...almost melancholic as well.

I think the repetition of Phoenix may have been over done a little but still an interesting write
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