Sparkling (Etheree)

by Angie   Feb 3, 2013


Sparkling (Etheree)

like a waterfall when the sun shines down
even the stars in the night time sky
diamonds dangling from your ear lobes
champagne, wine or perrier
snow under the moon light
just my thoughts on things
sparkling like the
eyes of a
silver
fox

Adjective club challenge
adjective/title: Sparkling
animal: Fox

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  • 11 years ago

    by Half Husband Half father

    Wow first time i read an etheree.. very different kind of poem small brief very technical, nice flow though... well written :)
    5/5
    now i know another form of poem ETHEREE hehe
    god bless u

  • 11 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Nice flow, easy read.

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    What I have always admired about your etheree's is your ability to make it flow... I adore the creativity of the title flowing right into the poem.... truly a beautiful and romantic piece...

    You added words that send the romantic nature alive from start to finish! Beautifully penned Ang <3

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I like where you took this challenge and also that you decided to make it into a formed piece. You have made a very beautiful Etheree and I like how you made it yours by stating these are things that you think of when giving the title.

    Well done. xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Nice Etheree Angie, really quite serene and paints a thought provoking image...

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