Andrew, This piece was powerfully written for the imagery was strong and the flow may have felt rocky in places but it added to the adjective...stormy and uncalm in its read.

Really much deserved Third Place :)

You continue to amaze me! I still can't believe that you just starting writing. This was another favorite of mine. I love it because it's running wild with vivid imagery, and I could experience the poem, while reading it. It's also cryptic and left room for interpretation, another reason why I loved it. Keep it up, Andrew!