Beautiful! It's amazing how just one small gesture, especially from a significant other, can change everything. Nice write, Saffie :)

The imagery in this piece is amazing and as has already been said this piece truly is beautiful. I like how you were able to elaborate so much on something so simple without losing interest for the piece.

Great write.

By the way I especially loved these two lines:

"My mind becomes a crystal ball in your presence,
clear and empty, yet I feel it filled with peace and serenity"