Comments : Domino Massacre

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I love the creativity here...what a great way to express your feelings of being the one to cause pain and upset...
    I look at this both ways that you shouldn't feel guilty and as if you made others fall because they fall by themselves...you may not have been able to stop yourself but they had the power to stop THEMselves...if that makes sense...
    but I also see that when you fall, it hurts others because they care about you, you unintentionally hurt them and therefore feel guilt about it.

    I felt this piece spoke so much and it really got me thinking but it was sad and made me reach out to you.

    Hugs...
    Saffie, you are an amazing writer!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    I love this metaphor, but it's sad to read. I see a person with a heavy burden, who's pain causes a domino effect. Dominoes may not be able to pick themselves, but there's always a hand that's ready to pick up the pieces. Great write, Saffie :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Hellon

    This is just so creative!! I love the metaphor of the domino. I was wondering where you were going placing yourself as the second in the chain but, after reading it I can see why....you put your trust in the first domino and that was the one to let you down...angering you as you knew the effect it was going to have on the one's behind you....what an absolutely BRILLIANT thought....really adored this one.