What a sad write :(. When we feel lost and alone we always seem to cling to any other person. But we should never change for the people that we love. From the beginning I get a sense of sadness and your words or voice can be heard. The emotions can be felt well. It seems like you let your heart out here. I think in ourselves we expect too much. That's why we try to be "perfect" for other people for them to love us. But if we just be ourselves the right people will love us. I saw no mistakes at all and it was really well written. You showed us your pain through words. The right words to captivate the reader and go with the flow of the poem. Well done!