Comments : Melancholy

  • 11 years ago

    by dalllllal

    I loved this great job

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Oh Saffie...
    I am thinking, as I read this...how many times I've felt lost, like I cannot be found and at times, didn't want to...

    Many events leave us feeling like we've failed, like we should not have tried, and will never try again, but we must always find the courage that's there, because it is, and sometimes, we learn enough just to try again...sometimes

    I love the simpleness of the structure, how it lasts long enough for you to feel but not too long that you get lost...

    Really heartbreaking but a piece that we can relate to here,

  • 11 years ago

    by Edward Oropeza

    Drowning into the depths...where even secrets will never be told, Saffie, it makes me colder, I felt like I'm dying in the depths too...so sad the way I figure it out. Good job.