The discription and wording of this poem are gre great, I so enjoyed reading it:)
Awesome job!!

This was suc a powerful poem , I loved the darkness in it and how you had a lot of nature in it, it was like a dark nature poem. I think you made a perfect job with your title and animal. I really like the idea of mother nature screaming, this was a great line, also the moon winking behind the clouds.

I love how imaginitive this poem was and how the readerhas to make up the scene in their own head as to who and what the mystery can be. Very well done. xxx

I love it Natasha, it was sooo you...really well penned, really amazing wording that you used and totally captivating...it was eerie and dark and had that suspense and fear but I really wanted to keep reading it again and again...

It was imaginative and the imagery was awesome, and the idea behind it was just really clever.

Great write :)

Chilling! Loved it!