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by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet
This poem was excellent. Rather than just giving up, ending it with a knife. Drinking is killing her softly (At least that's what I got out of it). She wants it all to stop, but she just can't resist . Drunk; She'd rather sleep, than find courage to slit her wrist . This was powerful. She wants to stop, but can't. Keeps drinking and drinking until this kills her. An uncontrollable urge. This piece left me speechless really. Loved it great poem 5/5