The guy who couldn't take it

by Kelwin lost in thought   Feb 5, 2013


There was a guy
his name was kelwin
all he wanted was to be happy
but for him
to be happy
he would have to die
so he thought
what should I do
should I live and be un happy
or die and finaly be happy
he thought for some time
then he said
the time has come
so he called up all his friends
he said his goodbyes
then he wrote a note
saying how sorry he was
and that he would love everyone
and that he will be watching over them
then to began taking the pills
then he was done he tooked over 100
then he went to his room
he heard a nock
and the person came in
it was his friend
she read the note
and began crying
then she started to search for him
she found him in his room
he was still alive
she ran to him and started crying
then she asked him why
why did he have to go do it
what he told her shocked her
he said it was cause he loved her
those were his last words
she held him and cried
then she pulled out a gun
and blew her brains out
love doesn't always come happy
they died together
her holding the guy who loved her
her holding the guy she loved

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  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    I like the third person view of yourself. And the major switch up at the end.

  • 11 years ago

    by whoami

    I think I wanna cry right now. That was really hard for me to read.

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    I'm speechless ......

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