by Xanthe Feb 5, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You taught me of fire, |
[Weekly Contest Comment: 2/11/13] |
by Saerelune
"Well done on lingering in the heat, the metaphor was quite consistent and effective, not too abstract, easily grasped. You've got a nice balance of abstract vs concrete imagery. There's a subtle sense of destructiveness and seductiveness that makes this piece even more powerful along with its clean-cut wording." |
Wonderful poem! |
by Hellon
I was likening this to our bushfire season for I see that you live in Australia too and you would be able to use this as a metaphor in your poems but....this line leads me to thing not.. |
by Baby Rainbow
Oh Xanthe I just love this. Your language use is just astounding. The opening stanza really captures the image of the fire and the blaze but also a kinf of ritual of worship for things that are no good for us. Very powerful. |