Oh mercy... where do I begin... I'm truly biting my lip.. because I feel this.. Your precious heart is dipped into each syllable of this piece...

I always say follow your heart, for tomorrow is a new day... the mind and past hurt can make you stop before it begins...

I love this.... Mercy! love you

Stunning Chels , it was me not you , lol

This was such a stunning piece I love how you incorporated every detail it just all came together
Beautifully , alot of people will relate to this so much
Your words will change lives.

Awesome :)

This is marvelous. A unique style in writing! Keep goinnn

"Fall for people I can't have. Live for unrealistic dreams."
I knew from this line that I can relate the most to this piece Chels. I know it all!

And this part..

"So I'm choosing to walk away.
From this relationship.
From this friendship.
From this habit."

Its so vivid, every emotion you talked about, every thing you felt inside .. I know it. And i know that sometimes you have to be the strong one to call it.

Its like you took everything I once felt and penned it for both of us to read, one of your best hon.

xxx

Wow this hurts my heart... it's so hard to walk away but sometimes it's what must be done. An emotional write.

I'll happily join in the others in the choir of praise you're getting here. Fantastic poem, Chelsea! It's flawless, really; the beat is good, the pace is not too slow, you don't shy away from keeping it real and heartfelt. It's a really attractive poem in many ways because of the real emotions that laces the stanzas and for that reason I can't find any faults and I'm really impressed and happy for you that you were able to get this out and in to something sensibe.

Amazing work :)

Ares

Flipping heck Chelsey, have you invaded my mind?!!

I know too well all that "Its me not you" crap... and I hate it...but you just penned everything I want to say...you broke into my head and ripped the words out of it

Flipping heck, you made me an emotional wreck...nodding along like a nodding dog and like ten thousand pins had been poked into my heart.

Plus I felt it on a personal level for you too...you really got into the piece and made it speak for you

x

Wow.. This reminded me of a past relationship and it really hit home. It's taken me back to what it was like when we broke up and how much it hurt.. I'm so sorry that you have to feel that pain. I know what it's like to crave that person, crave that kind of love. You couldn't have used any better words. . Amazing write.

Danika.

Nice one! 5/5 for you!

Wow. That's amazing. I was touched. :]