by Natasha
Hi, Chelsey. I'm Natasha. And this would be my first time ever reading your writing, but I'd choose this one as my favorite. 'Cause it's definitely the life of me you're talking of or more accurately, the urge to tell all this to that someone. |
by Tara Kay
You know what Chels...You go tell him how you feel..you go lay your heart out and show him what he is missing but don't waste time over what's not meant to be. Don't chase someone who can't see what they want and need is right there in front of them...a kick ass girl with a beautiful heart, beautiful smile...and a lot of wisdom and strength. |
by Chelsey
Hehe! I just love you!! :) Your comments make me smile ear to ear every time Tara Bear.. I write raw poetry, cant help it, but know I'm doing quite alright..I love life and love myself so boo-yah! :) |
Awww.... Chelsey I love this poem! So honest and heartfelt... I could relate to what you've expressed. I like the simplicity of this poem, and how it appears to be about two people who are either broken up or have feelings for each other but don't want to take the chance, and how they both contemplate speaking to each other, but would rather not... It's something I'm sure a lot of people can relate to. |
I just can't stop from getting the shivers after reading this Chels...it is so powerful. From talking about the ache of your heart because you want him and he feels the same and just the confusion of it will go anywhere good....you express these thoughts with passion. It's definitely deeper than just someone getting into a tizzy, this is something that seems to be taking the energy out of you and that last line just struck me. You've come to that decision, it's the right move, you have to do what's right for you too and I certainly feel it's not fair for your heart to go through all this. Amazing piece as always :] |
by Sunshine
Nominated as well.. |
by Baby Rainbow
I wish I could start this poem out with an inappropriate way |
by Meme
I loved the honesty in this piece, and how you let the reader see the vulnerability in your sadness. |