Please Dont let my world stop

by Chae   Feb 7, 2013


The pain hits me
I feel myself start to fall
I thought I was free
But back to this I crawl

The blackness is all around
And I'm being eaten up
Without making a sound
I know I won't be waking up

My world is crumbling
My mind is scattered
My eyes unfocused
My lips trembling

The wind stops
The sound ceases
My heart beats slowly
Please don't let my world stop

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  • 11 years ago

    by Sherwin Talapian

    No i won't :) very well done, nice use of words The pain hits me I feel myself start to fall.

    i feel this one ,it hits me a lot . :)

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