This is ANAZING Tony, soo inspirational. The way you ended it is just perfect!!!
Great job:)

WOW, WONDERFUL POEM

I thought you done really well on this because it is a leteral thinking poem and makes us wonder off within the poem to out own thouughts and beliefs and what we answer to these questions.

The idea of the lightning not striking twice and the car crash, that was powerful. It was a great way to get your point across.

your attitude becomes very postive and encouraging that things can be done if you just believe in yurself to do them.

Then the edning I love because it made me think of the blind reading brail language with their hands, their whole world is iin darkness and yet they make the impossible possible by showing us how to make the most of what you have. Very inspiring.

Great job.

@.@!!!

I like the angle you took with the challenge,
Its in my favourites kiddo :)

Well done and well penned :)

Whoa....last stanza.....EPIC

Seriously awesome!

This poem has such a wonderful meaning. Anything is possible if you just believe.

I adore the lightning analogy was amazing. As well as the last stanza talking about the blind! Just amazing!

This is awesome! Such a simple message yet so powerful. It's one that we sometimes take for granted, until we realize how true it really is. Great job, Tony!

Wow this made me think of what i have said and scoffed as "impossible" and i find that with this poem i could believe to make them again my dreams can become reality or hasn't history taught me that?

Very deep, inspiring poem :). "Impossible" is just a mindset, you conveyed this well near the end of this piece. "Impossible is just
another way of giving up,
anything is possible
if you believe."

The rhetorical questions are very effective as this is trying to get people to open their mind and by getting people to question is a good way of doing this :)

Wonderful write, 5/5