Alienated Scheme. [Haiku]

I adore haiku's because of the ability to capture a snapshot of nature within just a few simple words...and you done just that.

Wonderfully done! :)

Love Haiku's this one said a lot in the few words allowed. Excellent

Wow. Usually, I'm not a fan of haiku, but the way you wrote this, it's explosively powerful. I completely adore this. Such small descriptively loud words. It felt like such an extreme piece, but it's so little.

Wonderful!

I am always likes the haiku,
nice written...