Fire

by Thomas   Feb 8, 2013


I wish you knew
the damages you are causing
behind the walls of this house.
How your presence
ignited a fierce fire.
How your absence
feeds the fire even more.
It's eating me from the inside.
My feelings for you,
they're burning my brain and soul.
Too damaging to keep inside,
too strong to keep down.
No choice but to force my mouth open wide.
To release the toxic fumes,
to scream out your name
in agonizing pain.
So that the world may know
that my heart burns for you.

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  • 11 years ago

    by ReBecca

    I didnt get a sense of "naughtiness" from this write...I felt deep anger and fierce pain and possibly unspoken betrayal...anyway I liked it...I've been going through many poems today and I've only found two that were even coherent enough to make sense...so it was very nice to read this, understand and enjoy it...thank you.

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I felt the emotion and that craving for that someone special. Great write

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Absolutly awsome !!!!!! Love it!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    I love this poem, I appreciate a good love story especially when it's passionate and intense without being too naughty.

    Beautifully written...

  • 11 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Really a sad one!
    well written!!

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