Really a sad one!
well written!!

I love this poem, I appreciate a good love story especially when it's passionate and intense without being too naughty.

Beautifully written...

Absolutly awsome !!!!!! Love it!!!

I felt the emotion and that craving for that someone special. Great write

I didnt get a sense of "naughtiness" from this write...I felt deep anger and fierce pain and possibly unspoken betrayal...anyway I liked it...I've been going through many poems today and I've only found two that were even coherent enough to make sense...so it was very nice to read this, understand and enjoy it...thank you.