by silvershoes Feb 9, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Father, |
by Ben Pickard
This really is a very moving and powerful poem - again, beautifully written. A lovely flow to the piece and I love the final two lines. |
by Sincuna
This is the type of poem that I wish would never end, just as how the speaker hoped for her father to stay a little longer. |
Tears welled up while I read this. My father has been on borrowed time for awhile now and I count my blessings every day. I try to think ahead of when he will be gone ... but I can't, that hurts too much. |
by Angie
(Weekly Contest Comment - 2/18/13) |
[Weekly Contest Comment: 2/18/13] |