by Flynel Feb 10, 2013
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
When you walk in |
by Skyler
The pace of this one reminds me of something that would be monologued in the head of a Miyazaki character. The mood is set early on, as the first few lines create a scene of awkward communication and a sense of discomfort. This is a strong poem, and it feels genuine. |