Your really sweet......anyone would be lucky to have you:)

Beautifully written

Simple and elegantly spoken. Stay true to yourself and she will come.

EEppppppp super sweet, I love your work, and I can't wait to read more, fabalous job with this poem, YOU ARE SOOOO TALENTED, and she is ultra lucky!!!!! 100/100

Hahahahaha,,,,sorry she.....my comment is really opposite from all of them.....jeez.....no comment...ok thats your poem..

"and i wont give up.
to love you, as long as i live.
I will do that. "

really???? just a big question mark about it...lols...

coz i dont know...my perception about you is really...dot..dot..dot...