Frozen (String of Senryu)

by Skyler   Feb 11, 2013


As Spring Whispers to
Go forth and live my new life
I remember you

Footsteps echo down
An empty path in my head
That once held your voice

Sounds and smells of home
Suddenly, I am back there
Waiting for your call

Your memory fades
Even the smell of the rain
Does not recall you

A desire to live
As I once lived, with you there
Has kept me in thought

There are no tears now
I know that your memory
Walks with me, always

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  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Sweet stringed senryus.

  • 11 years ago

    by dalllllal

    Beautiful poem I loved it

  • 11 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    There isn't a thing I didn't like. Well done

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I love the free flow of this well written beautiful poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    This poem is adorable, I really love the tone you have create in this poem. I find this poem to be romantic, yet a bit sad. Love stays with us long after our partner leave, whether they have left due to uncontrollable circumstances or just fell out of love it's still a heartbreaking situation. I really wish I could pick a favorite stanza, but honestly I can't because I love the whole piece. I was totally grabbed in from beginning to the very end.

    Beautiful...5/5

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