Succinct and to the point. vivid, palatable, and good to think about. what it lacked in length it made up for in impact, truly a well done acrostic, very creative. i have no negative statements to make about this piece, i thought its construction and execution were flawless

You're my favorite acrostic writer I've seen on PnQ so far. You don't adlib or drag on, each line is direct.

This was lovely. I love how most of your poems come back to God. Life is ordered by God, and directed by Him alone. His love is what created, and what sustains us.

This could also be taken as the person's own spirit is what keeps you loving and keeps you moving on through life.

Either way, this is great, like all your work.

I think it's ironic how some people go there whole lives looking for love or trying to discover what love it, when it's just this simple. God is love, and put us here to spread it. Beautiful poem.