Comments : The Soul Owner's Plight

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Good poem keep writing like this.

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    This is really unique. I like the concept, and the rhythm still flowed smoothly, even though every line didn't rhyme. I love the repetition, especially with the imagery of broken glass. It makes me think that the speaker is obsessed about something he can't change. Nice work!

    • 11 years ago

      by Guy Epsilon

      Excellent you see it! Isn't there that thing in all of us we hopelessly try and change? At least that is the question I try and pose. Thanks for the comment, I appreciate you taking the time to read it and post your thoughts.

  • 11 years ago

    by Skyler

    This reads like a children's book. In the good way. A broken person conveying a message in simple terms.