Human Being, the Talking Animal [String Senryus]

by Khalid M Darwish   Feb 12, 2013


A human being -
is a talking animal
This is somehow right

Can't you see some ones
act like crows, picking wastes to
spread them everywhere

Some act like scorpion
Stinging people either to
hurt them or not to

some act like wolves
who insist to leave the good
and take the evil

and some act like bees
which collect roses nectars
to turn to honey

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  • 11 years ago

    by Stephen

    Double post, sorry!

  • 11 years ago

    by Stephen

    This is spectacular. I'm in awe at the moment, I was really surprised by this. I love the connection you've made with human beings and animals, & the use of different animals & their activities to describe humans and their behaviors. Great job here, looking forward to reading more of your pieces.

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is amazing! Also I must add that you tried to associate people with animals with their traits. And in the process, the ideas churned out extremely well.
    Awesomely done:)
    Nominated!!:)

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    I love how you made it so that there was a place for everyone... frankly i am a mix of a crow or a wolve since i am both but this poem is by far the most beautiful that i have ever seen! :) 5/5

    Queen Ashlin

    • 11 years ago

      by Khalid M Darwish

      How sweet is the praise that I will be encouraged to pen much more beautiful pieces. It means a lot. Thank you.

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