Comments : Human Being, the Talking Animal [String Senryus]

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    I love how you made it so that there was a place for everyone... frankly i am a mix of a crow or a wolve since i am both but this poem is by far the most beautiful that i have ever seen! :) 5/5

    Queen Ashlin

    • 11 years ago

      by Khalid M Darwish

      How sweet is the praise that I will be encouraged to pen much more beautiful pieces. It means a lot. Thank you.

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is amazing! Also I must add that you tried to associate people with animals with their traits. And in the process, the ideas churned out extremely well.
    Awesomely done:)
    Nominated!!:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Stephen

    This is spectacular. I'm in awe at the moment, I was really surprised by this. I love the connection you've made with human beings and animals, & the use of different animals & their activities to describe humans and their behaviors. Great job here, looking forward to reading more of your pieces.

  • 11 years ago

    by Stephen

    Double post, sorry!