Comments : Haiku From Travelling

  • 11 years ago

    by TSI25

    I really liked all of these, quite a bit. my favorite one is probably the one with the spdier and his web (i own a pet tarantula and rather like spiders). in fact this made me really want to go on a roadtrip down toward arizona...

    i feel that some of them lacked a bit of impact, im left wondering where exactly do the bears go? do you mean that she defecates in the woods or literally that she travels to where bears travel...

    over all though i really enjoyed reading these, haikus are always fun.

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    I feel every haiku stanza inspiring here! I love the simplicity in all the expressions given. excellent poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    Fantastic, you get the real feeling that your attention shifts from one event to another when reading this.
    Which works well with your title.

    Not just any haiku, a chain of 5 well written haikus.

    I am going to nominate,
    (not enough formed poetry gets nominated)

    • 11 years ago

      by Skyler

      I really appreciate that!

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very though provoking and well written haikus

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    I love this! It's thought provoking, with a touch of humor. Very nice! You painted a vividly beautiful picture of nature, filled with wonder and simplicity. Nice work!

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is very impressive to have a formed line of haikus and make them flow into each other and continue without flaw. I agree with Darren, not enough forms get nominated and this is very well written. Well done

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I love haikus and this is great.